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I Believe: Afghanistan
I believe that the religion of Afghanistan, Islam, is part of the reasoning why the country is in the situation it’s in today. Religion has always been a huge part of life and history in this world. People need a way to live their lives; some prefer a set of rules to follow for everyday life. Some are brought into their religion by birth and where they live; where others have the luxury of choosing the religion, which they prefer to follow. In any case, religion is a way of life which people tend to become very attached and close to. Some will sacrifice their lives for it, and gain religious pride for their religion against others, creating ignorance of other religions, which can cause wars, like many religious wars which we have seen throughout history. This ignorance can be seen as religious pride where people cannot compromise with other religions because they cannot accept any other religion but their own. Afghanistan is certainly not the first to have religious pride stifling their view of the modern world, and religion is certainly not the only reason for their present situation, however that is the point which I’m focusing on.
I believe that a reason why Afghanistan is in its situation today is partly because of the nature of their religion. When religion is put first priority in a nation, as it is in Afghanistan, sometimes too much power is put in religion’s hands. People must remember that in this modern age, religion does not solve all problems. Reality must be considered as well to ensure success on an international and political level.
Sometimes, religion can bring a nation together; give its people a sense of togetherness and organization. However, sometimes religion can be a country’s weakness, as in Afghanistan’s case. When the people of a country make religion their first priority in daily life as well as in government issues, I believe that religion becomes their way of life, and they become deeply attached to it. The spiritual being and connection people have with their god or gods is one that I think is hard for some non-religious people to fully understand. It is a good thing for the individual because it gives him a way to live and something to believe in day to day, however, it is a bad thing when religious people become close-minded to other religions and therefore ignorance is induced. I believe that people who are deeply religious sometimes think that their religion is the only way, causing them to be unaccepting and ignorant of other countries and their ways of life and/or religions. This means that countries of opposing or simply different religions cannot compromise with each other, which leads to war and violence. This religious pride and the resulting wars in places like the Middle East today can be compared in some ways with nationalism in Europe in the late 1700’s/early 1800’s. The religious struggles in Europe during that time, along with a highly increased sense of nationalism in some countries, caused them to butt-heads with neighboring countries, just as Afghanistan is experiencing today. Religious pride within a country, much like nationalism, can give a nation a sense of pride for their history and culture. It can also bring out conflict and wars such as the wars on terrorism, as well as the struggles between Afghanistan and its neighboring countries (e.g. Israel) today.
Another reason for which I think religion was the cause of Afghanistan’s present situation is the nature of their religion. Its strict religion has made its people submissive in a way to modern ways in a changing world. Religion is all that the people of Afghanistan know, they worship the Koran, with more than 90% of the population being having strong religious values. This makes it easy for groups and leaders (e.g. Taliban, Saddam Hussein, and the U.S. troops) to take control of the society, because of the lacking political view of the country due to historical issues which were never resolved, leaving the Middle East at unrest still today. Their incredible devotion to their religion makes them easily swayed politically. Sometimes, religion can let close-mindedness get in the way of reality and the long-term goals and success of the country as a whole on the international level. Also, religious wars can make the country even weaker than it was before by hurting the economy, the morale, and the daily lives of the people. This has happened to Afghanistan, making the country weaker and less powerful than before. However, as I stated before, religion is a way of life for the people, it is a powerful, spiritual entity, which I believe can be used to Afghanistan’s benefit in repairing the country, if used in the right way. If the Afghanistan people can organize themselves and use their religion to their benefit, I believe they have a chance at repair, revival, and survival in this ever-changing world. They have such a strong relationship with religion and such a high number are religious, that they have opportunity for strong nationalism. If they all band together and take pride in their nation, religion and culture, I believe they have hope at successful future for their country, but the U.S. troops are not helping to resolve any of the old issues, they are simply creating more violence. I believe the people of Afghanistan must take their own leadership on how to run the country in order to reach peace and comprimise. After all, a recent news poll at CNN stated that 78% of Afghanistan people liked their lives before U.S. troops came in the country better than with the U.S. troops there.
I believe that Afghanistan was put in its situation today for several reasons. First, their submissive nature and religion based society suppresses the power of the people to hold back incoming groups or leaders who try to organize and control the people. Second, the Afghanistan people are bred to ONLY follow and fulfill their religious path in life; all other purposes are either prohibited or looked down upon. This makes it hard for them to accept any new ideas and suppresses change which could possible benefit the society. Lastly, strong feelings of religious pride and close-mindedness brought out war among people and countries in the Middle East. I believe that there is hope, however for the Afghanistan people. If they can use their powerful religion to their benefit to organize themselves politically, than they can be successful as a people, as a country, and as an international player in the modern world.
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I believe that the Afghanistan people were put in the political situation which they are in today for a reason. I think that their religion, Muslim, plays a big role in this reasoning. Religion has always been a huge part of life in this world. People need a way to live their lives; some prefer a set of rules to follow for everyday life. Some are brought into their religion by birth and where they live; where others have the luxury of choosing their religion. In any case, religion is a way of life which people tend to become very attached and close to. Some will sacrifice their lives for it, which, along with religious pride and ignorance of other religions causes wars,. This ignorance can be seen as religious pride where people cannot compromise with other religions because they cannot accept any other religion but their own. This is not the Afghanistan people’s fault totally; they are simply a victim of circumstance.
I believe that a reason why Afghanistan is in its situation today is because of the nature of their religion. When religion is put first priority in a nation, as it is in Afghanistan, sometimes too much power is put in religion’s hands. (Maybe you should change the order of the sentence, so it’s more like “In Afghanistan religion is the number one priority and religion holds too much power in the country.”) People must remember that in this modern age, religion does not solve all problems. Reality must be considered as well to ensure success on an international and political level. (I don’t understand the conclusion to the paragraph)
Sometimes, religion can bring a nation together; give its people a sense of togetherness and organization. (You should expand on this idea and than have another paragraph about the positive effects. )However, sometimes religion can be a country’s weakness, as in Afghanistan’s case. When the people of a country make religion their first priority in daily life as well as in government issues, I believe that religion becomes their way of life, and they become deeply attached to it. The spiritual being and connection people have with their god or gods is one that I think is hard for some non-religious people to fully understand. It is a good thing for the individual because it gives him a way to live and something to believe in day to day, however, it is a bad thing when religious people become close-minded to other religions and therefore ignorance is induced. I believe that people who are deeply religious sometimes think that their religion is the only way, causing them to be unaccepting and ignorant of other countries and their ways of life and/or religions. This means that countries of opposing or simply different religions cannot compromise with each other, which leads to war and violence. This religious pride and the resulting wars in places like the Middle East today can be compared in some ways with nationalism in Europe in the late 1700’s/early 1800’s. The religious struggles in Europe during that time, along with a highly increased sense of nationalism in some countries, caused them to butt-heads with neighboring countries, just as Afghanistan is experiencing today. Religious pride within a country, much like nationalism, can give a nation a sense of pride for their history and culture. It can also bring out conflict and wars such as the wars on terrorism, as well as the struggles between Afghanistan and its neighboring countries (e.g. Israel) today.
Another reason for which I think religion was the cause of Afghanistan’s present situation is the nature of their religion. It is a submissive religion, and therefore a sort of submissive, poor, third world culture. Religion is all that the people of Afghanistan know, they worship the Koran, and will do anything for their religion. This makes it easy for groups and leaders (e.g. Taliban, Saddam Hussein, and the U.S. troops) to come in and take control of the society. Their incredible devotion to their religion makes them easily swayed politically. Sometimes, religion can let close-mindedness get in the way of reality and the long-term goals and success of the country as a whole on the international level. Also, religious wars can make the country even weaker than it was before by hurting the economy, the morale, and the daily lives of the people. This has happened to Afghanistan, making the country weaker and less powerful than before. However, as I stated before, religion is a way of life for the people, it is a powerful, spiritual entity, which I believe can be used to Afghanistan’s benefit in repairing the country, if used in the right way. If the Afghanistan people can organize themselves and use their religion to their benefit, I believe they have a chance at repair, revival, and survival in this ever-changing world. After all, a recent news poll at CNN stated that 78% of Afghanistan people liked their lives before U.S. troops came in the country better than with the U.S. troops there. (Maybe you could write another paragraph about what the people in Afghanistan believe about their own religion)
I believe that Afghanistan was put in its situation today for several reasons. First, their submissive nature and religion based society suppresses the power of the people to hold back incoming groups or leaders who try to organize and control the people. Second, the Afghanistan people are bred to ONLY follow and fulfill their religious path in life; all other purposes are either prohibited or looked down upon. This makes it hard for them to accept any new ideas and suppresses change which could possible benefit the society. Lastly, strong feelings of religious pride and close-mindedness brought out war among people and countries in the Middle East. I believe that there is hope, however for the Afghanistan people. If they can use their powerful religion to their benefit to organize themselves politically, than they can be successful as a people, as a country, and as an international player in the modern world.
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